Comments on Willfully and Persistently: Dreams of the Cybermen

And I kept forgetting about my story points. I ne...

2011-06-23T22:29:04.269-04:00

And I kept forgetting about my story points. I needed to use the to, actually, succeed at more of the challenges.

I enjoyed the entire story, especially with the inclusion of the Alpha/Beta Radiation for Wyman. Everything else was great as well.

I did use about 5 story points at some point...I t...

2011-06-22T22:53:53.884-04:00

I did use about 5 story points at some point...I think I overkilled something...

It was me who tackled the Boba Non-Fett character....

2011-06-22T09:16:10.264-04:00

It was me who tackled the Boba Non-Fett character. And any other changes you made, actually made the story better.

Yeah, on the whole I probably understated the amou...

2011-06-22T08:51:25.062-04:00

Yeah, on the whole I probably understated the amount of time Wyman spent obsessing over things. I'll certainly make a note of his extra interest in the Quintesson, though. That's something I can work with.

And forgot to mention about how Doctor Wyman had b...

2011-06-22T01:42:57.944-04:00

And forgot to mention about how Doctor Wyman had begun to show a higher interest in the Quintesson, the cryogenic material, and the search for the Cybermen in the future. This could be called a healthy interest in the advanced technology, but it can- and will- become an unhealthy obsession. Which can lead into some interesting stories. Such as his becoming lost on the "Alternate Cybermen World."